Depending on the melody you're using, that could work into a nice song, James.  Change maybe a word or two, and..as I said, could be a decent, even great song in that. 

Remember this?  "Louie Louie, oh babe...said we gotta go..yah,yah,yah yah...Louie Louie, oh babe, said we gotta go".   (Your lyrics are much better, and that song sold millions...go figure ).   Actually, it's a great R n R tune..one of the classics. 

Then there's..."I'm a picker, I'm a grinner, I'm a lover, I'm a sinner, play my music in the sun.." etc..('nother million seller, and again, truly a great Rock N' Roll song).

Then there's..."She loves you, Yeah,Yeah, Yeah".

Gene