but it...doesn't ryhme...it isn't even a...poem. A spin of sorts itself to call this poetry.

this is...however

the man who built the world

the man who built the world

he built it so fine

he built it so fine

it feels like its mine...

(Unity Toher age 6) She sings it too...it has more verses...her first attempt at song-writing...I'll let y'all know how it goes...DB you have serious competition